June 27, 2008

My Mad Creations of Today..

I don't know what happen to me today.. after seeing two picture I wrote two poems..these are in Bangla..I don't know who read my blog will like it or not... but after a long gap I have wrote these poems.. and can't able to control my self to share it with others......Here are my poems:


Photographer: Farhana Zamil Tinny

##Amar janala

Amar ghorer chotto janala,
sheta diye ami akash dekhi
akasher rong dekhi,
rup dekhi,
r moner majhe chobi aki
gan kori, notun shur tuli...

aj amar pashe keu nei
ache shudu oi ak chilte akash
amar janalar ak chilte akash
godhuli r alo te akash amay dake
rong e amay rangate chay
shapno akte chay amar mone..

aj amar apon keu nei
ache shudhu oi akchilte akash..
je amay shopno dekhay...
amar shopner feriwala..



##Tomake Boler Chilo

Shedin godhulir alo te tumi amar pashe chile....
hat duti dhore chile, kache tene niye bolechile Valobashi..
amar mone tomar chobi ake diye chile...
agamir shopno akae diyechile...

shedin godhulir alo te tumi amar sobtake tomar kore niyechile..
bolechile, amader shopno kakhono shotti hobe na jani....
tarporeo tomay valobashi....shopno dekhi....
tomay vabi...tomay chai...

shedin godhulir alo te amader shopnogulu mone basa bedhechilo..
aj abar godhuli eseche.....
ami aka dariye aci..tumi pase nei...
shudhu ache tomar deya alokito shesob shapno....
r tomar jonne amar offuranto valobasha..

shedin godhuli belay amar kichu boler chilo...
tumi takhon pase chile..kintu kisu bola hoyni...
aj ami bolbo..jodio tumi pase nei....
aj ami bolbo, tomay valobashi..onek besi..


##Megh!!

megh o megh,
jaccho kothay?
amay nebe tomar songe?
tomar shathe pari debo
ojanar oi pothe jabo...
nebe amay?

megh o megh,
tomar velay vashbo ami
r vashabo joto dhukkho
joto kosto ache joma...

nebe amay tomar songe?
megh o megh!!

##Opekkha

je tumi amay bachte shikhiyecho
je tumi amay haste shikhiyecho
she tumi amay keno aj
bina doshe dure shoriye diccho

aj tumi amar theke dure acho jani
tai bole ki amar chokher jol tomay chuye jay na??
amar kosto gulu ki bujhte paro na??
tahole keno bolechile amay tumi bujho?
aj tomar kache amar prosno...
uttor dao..ami oppekhay achi



I am waiting for some comments...

3 comments:

Kazi Mamun said...

kobitar khetre ekta kotha ami prai e boli..j sarthok kobita hoy tokhon jokhon- jokhon kobi ono bhabei tar onuvooti k sadharon bhasai prokash korte na pere kobitar asroy nen...hmm ek onuvootir o abar vinno matra budh thakte hobe er sathe...
hmm eta sotti j tumi onuvooti k dharon korecho chomotkar bhabei..kinto er sathe pathok keu tsr nijer moto kore vabar sojug dite hobe...jeno pathok vabte baddho hoy...
huk ta prem... biroho..ba druher kobita..

Anonymous said...

kobitagulo porlam, valo tobe aro valo hoto jodi vab e boichitro thakto aro, cliche hoye geche besh kichu, ek peshe na kore shobar jonne tule rakhle aro valo hoto

"aj amar apon keu nei
ache shudhu oi akchilte akash..
je amay shopno dekhay...
amar shopner feriwala.."

ei parata darun legeche, kintu er sathe onnano parar jogshutro aro shundor vabe hote parto

arekta bepar shobdo nirbachoner belay ektu kheyal korle aro valo hobe, kon kon protishobdo kon kon jaygay valo lage ta nijer ee bujhe nite hobe

Anonymous said...

honestly ekta kotha boli,ei lekha gulok kobita bola jabena kichutei, egulo teenager der prem potrer moto hoye geche!!!
r ekta kotha, chondo charao kobita hote pare jtake bole goddochondo.
tobe kobita jodi ekantoi likhte chao, kobita poro onek, kobita guli onuvob korar chesta koro.
jkono kichu likhte gele age sei bishoyta somporke prochur porashona thakte hoy. but onekei achen jara study charai paren, tara nomosso bekti! amar kothai plz rag korona! tomar chesta ta amar valo legeche bolei eto kotha bola.